I am currently trying to find an agent to help me market a mystery series I’m writing. Book one, Blizzard Conditions, is complete and ready to submit. I recently broke up my first book into two. Both new books are reassembled and the fragments cemented together with new transitions and descriptive material, and six other books that follow it are essentially complete. I really hope to have the first one well into the final editing process with either a publisher or agent before declaring the others finished; in case I need to make changes of fact, characterization, or setting, I will need to carry those changes through the later volumes.
My working title for the series is 2011: Sheriff Al Jordan’s Year from Hell. I classify them as small town sheriff’s procedurals. The fictional setting is Jackson, Tecumseh County, Illinois, on the Mississippi River between St. Louis and Cairo. I chose 2011 for the time frame because it was a miserable year weather-wise in that area and the economy was still in the doldrums. Both severe weather events and the nearly bankrupt state of the county economy hamper him throughout the series. All the cases start out as relatively routine, but soon burgeon into much larger cases that exceed the bounds of his county and his resources to deal with them, so he needs to call for help from state or federal agencies. In the early books, he doesn’t even have his own jail or detention facilities.
The narrator is Al Jordan. He is starting his sixth term as sheriff and has worked in that office before as deputy since graduating from high school. He is a sixty-six-year-old bachelor, mild-mannered and highly respected by his deputies and colleagues in the courthouse. He is not hard-boiled or macho. Because of meager staffing, Al spends more time in the field than most sheriffs in counties of a similar size.
Several themes run throughout the series in addition to money woes and recurrent severe weather. One of the new county commissioners is venal and determined to make Al’s life as hellish as possible. Also, Al is realizing that he has been so wedded to his work that he has little life outside it. If he is to have a meaningful retirement in four years, he’d better start making preparations soon.
I’ve been working with a local deputy sheriff who has read my work for accuracy regarding law enforcement procedures, facts, and terminology. When I was little, Pullman had a population of only 3000 so I've experienced a dose of small town living. My mother and I've visited and regularly corresponded with her extended family who lived in even smaller towns in rural Illinois. My family saved all those letters we received and, when cleaning out my basement, I found a wealth of insight into small town life as they described the minutia of their daily lives. I've lived in five different states including three in the Midwest , and I've traveled in all but those U. S. states from New Mexico east into the deep south. During those travels, I've encountered a delightful assortment of colorful characters and, I've drawn on those experiences in creating my characters and setting.
The story starts with his taking the oath of office for the sixth term. Immediately after the ceremony he is sent out to accompany and ambulance and snow plow to a medical emergency. On the return trip, he notices body parts sticking out of the high snow banks on the side of the road. They stop only long enough to make sure he wasn't hallucinating. When he returns to the scene with other help and the plow, they find and dig six bodies out of the snowbank and ice where an earlier plow shoved them. They find two more the following day. All have been autopsied, are partially preserved, and are missing hands, teeth, various internal organs, and eyes. In the course of learning where the bodies were headed, he stumbles onto a much older possible murder that was originally diagnosed as an heart attack.
Many agents ask for a comparison of my work with others. Until earlier this year, I had been unable to find anything that I felt met that description until I discovered Craig Johnson's Longmire series. In reading them, I'm truly surprised at many similarities, though there are differences, too. For instance, his take place in Wyoming and have a western flavor--mine take place in Southern Illinois, which has lingering remnants of the old South. The atmospheres are very different.
Our heroes are both sheriffs nearing the end of their career, grooming potential replacements. They are single; his sheriff is a widower, mine still a bachelor. Both are serving small fictional counties on miniscule budgets with inadequate staff and equipment. His is larger in area and smaller in population. We feature small town life with a county full of interesting characters.
More recently, I read J. A. Jance's latest in her Joanna Brady series and I found some similarities there, too. Like Al and Longmire, she had problems in her own life as well as courthouse politics to deal with, and all three take place in small rural counties with budget limitations.